Valentine’s Day is a day to share with a loved one and show how much they mean to you. To me my Valentine’s Day was both sad and delightful. I did not have my Valentine but I was in Las Vegas.
This year was the hardest Valentine’s Day, my boyfriend and I have been fighting and decided not to spend Valentine’s Day together. It was really hard but we needed our space. My sister could tell that I was feeling blue so she invited me to Las Vegas. And it changed everything.
I had a blast. We walked all over the Strip. We went into all the casinos, and little factories, like the M&M factory. We went on the New York New York roller coaster. We did everything and underage person could do in Vegas.
Even though I was sad on Valentine’s Day it turned out better then I thought. I made the best of it and it helped. My boyfriend and I are happy we had our space and happy we worked everything out. So I guess my Valentine’s Day was more delightful than sad.
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Over all this is a good essay. Just a pointer you should reread your essays to catch a few mistakes because i caught a few misspelled words and punctuation errors such as commas. But it was a good essay and I'm glad you and your boy friend are doing better.
ReplyDeleteThis essay overall was quick and to the point which was detailed as well. There were a few mispelled words and commas missing. Even though it was a great quick to the point, she was very descriptive and gave the reader a good picture as to how her Valentine's Day was.
ReplyDeleteAfter reading this essay I felt as if it was very well written, directions were clearly followed. She used many good transitions as well as had some good points. Her thesis was well structured. Im glad she made the best of her Valentine's Day. Overall it was well written and I enjoyed reading it.
ReplyDeleteYour essay was very well organized, it was very detail and descripted. I am glad you at least enjoyed your Valentines Day. There are just a few minor grammar errors.
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